Brandon
Best: I like how you found out how they felt during the pregnancy,you allowed the reader to get a small understanding of what goes on in the mind of a pregnant women.
Interest: It makes me wonder if there are any social studies about pregnant women and they're common moods, or if they have mood swings and what they think about it.
David
Best : I like that you showed two different point of views, one positive one not too positive.
Interest: Why do they glamorized pregnancy,even though its not as glamorized as it once was they still ignore the dangers of it.
Lucy
Best : I like how you made it more or a conversation instead of an interview, it made me want to continue to read.
Interest: I've seen a television show called "I didn't know I was pregnant" the stories are so odd but it breaks the stereotype of what a pregnant women looks like or should look like.
Bryanna
Best: You showed a different aspect of pregnancy and how it effects people in you interview.
Interest: why is teen pregnancy continued to be glorified
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